Four Seasons of Man

  • SPRING

Novena of Life

Wonder revealed with each breath

Gestation complete

  • SUMMER

Pink and white warriors

Cherry blossoms poke the sun

Battles won and lost

  • FALL

Confused at day’s end

Greek Siren’s song in distance

Silent Silhouette

  • WINTER

Evening eulogy

Shrouded moonlight chants goodbye

Sky welcomes Spirit

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15 thoughts on “Four Seasons of Man

  1. Hi,
    Sorry I don’t know your name lovely post and relevant to my life’s journey when I am getting in touch with the seasons. I will write this poem in my journal.
    Thank you for your likes on my recent posts & your follow.
    The water melon & seaside pic on your blog particularly appealed to me as I thoughtvof Gambia, a country I visit regularly.

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    • Hi, Margaret. Thank you for your fine compliment. I look forward to following your artistic adventures and learning more about this wide and wonderful world through you. I haven’t had the pleasure of going to the Gambia, but from what I have read, it looks lovely! (My name is Carol, by the way. It’s nice meeting you)

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  2. Good haiku never hits one on the head with the 5-7-5 form, includes the seasons, and each line is a complete thought. How nice to read a poem that respects the form and expresses lovely, original thoughts at the same time.

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    • Thank you. Quite a compliment. I’m still learning the nuances and rules regarding different forms of haiku. It’s fun following the talented poets on Word Press who know so much more about the art form.

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    • I enjoy your blog. December babies have a natural bond. Somewhere there should be a button that says “follow” that you can click. Not sure why it isn’t showing.

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